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Rated: E · Poetry · Young Adult · #1672854
A poem i wrote just seeing if i can get a rate or suggestions about it.
Words stoned me thru a tornado

The cave echos its secrets that are engraved in its walls

We release are secrets between lines thru bars,stanzas and melody

Which hold the foundation

I speak to people with minds and ears

But when i look their souls are empty

These lines, this stanza starts as any introvert

When spoken the tone of their octave blows us away

In shock like the aftermath of any eruption

Plates from beneath our feet shift as if a sign

Hearts pound in unison as a solid bass

The attention is as sharp as a snare

Such harmonies bring peace and tranquility

Such lyrics cover all with understanding and acceptance

Like a blanket gently laid over to protect and hide

The chorus is chanted over and over as if a prayer

Empty souls have been awaken and all spirits have risen to the occasion

Each verse tapped into ones self as if the message is knighting its soldier

With the orchestra strong behind the secret all have acknowledged its message

Guilt and shame have fallen like a  lightening struck sky that pours rain

Fulfilling its destiny, its out

The secret strums on every note that plays a chord

Like a framed photo all are as still as a pose, captured

Still the secret and message marinates

Attention all your my audience and my theme
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