Hidden Flaws- story of my life.

Before I post the first chapter of the story, this story is written in free verse form, and will have alternative perspectives between the two main characters, that's all enjoy!

James

Rabid
    That is what I would call
    The girls at this school.
Attention   
    Seeking whores who
    Strive to be on top.
    Interpret as you may.
Seeking
    Any semblance of a normal life
    A life they were so deprived of as children.
Girls
    Like this deserve
    Failure and all its glory
Sinking
    Into their own self-bubble
Lower
    And lower they fall, but
    These girls will never ever hit rock bottom
    That would just be unethical
Until   
    That one moment where it all becomes too much
    Until the life they thought was glamorous
    Turns out not to be
They
    Want to be noticed though
    Girls love the attention
    The names, good or bad,
    It’s all what they want.
Fall,   
    From grace some might say
    But I see these girls rising to the top someday
    Who knows our future president might be
    underneath that fake exterior



I stay away,
Watching from a distance,
The hair flips, the half-hearted
Smiles that suck you into
Their desperate little world.

I find this all so fascinating
How these girls make their mark, tearing
Worlds apart, most of all
Breaking every poor boy's heart.
And some not so poor boys
I might add.

But it’s the whole system of it all
That I find is quite fascinating,
Well drawn-out machines
That run off attention, if the
Attention stops, the machines die
Fade back into the scenery and
rust away.

This, of course only happens
In special cases, cases that
Need to be studied and watched
Cases like:

Hayden Murphy