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by Major
Rated: 13+ · Sample · Emotional · #1725292
When love knocks you down, Major is a living example that you must get back up.
When love knocks you down, Major is a living example that you must get back up. Death, heartache, drama, and love gone wrong all tie into Major developing a heart condition called Mitral Valve Prolapse. Major gives an account of how her mother’s death triggered her heart to weaken and the love of men caused it to shatter. If you ever needed proof that love kills, Major’s life is a must read.



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CHAPTER 1





February 17th, 2009

“Ms. Love, are you feeling okay?”

“Yea.”

“Your heart is beating dangerously fast. We’re going to





move you to a separate room in the ICU unit.”



“Okay.”



The smell of Clorox hit my nose. The bright hospital

lights blinded my eyes. As the doctors filled the room and

stared at me with amazement I lay there wondering what

the big deal was.



“Okay Ms. Love we’re going to try to slow your heart

down. It should be beating around 80 times per minute;

it’s up to 200. That’s extremely high.”



As they injected me with the first shot of medicine

my heart literally stopped. My chest tightened. My face

grimaced. Fear ran through my body. I had to remain calm.



7







MAJOR





“No changes. Do it again.”



The second shot had the same effect, or lack thereof.

My heart still raced rapidly. After the third dose they

stopped. By that time I was given permission to invite

my boyfriend into the room; who I instructed to call my

family. As hours passed the doctors were confused as to

what exactly was wrong with me. My heart began to slow

down after numerous IV’s. Over 20 to be exact. My pee

was clear.



By midnight so many of my family members had

come and gone bearing gifts and love, fear and confusion,

desperation and anger. They all came and left with the same

question, what is wrong with her? Through it all I never

feared for my life until I saw the fear in my boyfriend’s

eyes. As he grabbed my hand and begged me not to leave

him I knew he was sincere.



Tears filled my eyes. How could the same eyes that

were so cold and enraged nearly 24 hours earlier be so

needy and desperate? I knew then and there that I had to

pull through. If not for me, for him.



8







LOVE KILLS



LOVE SICK





They say what doesn’t kill me defi nes me



so I’m laying in the hospital blindly

why shouldn’t I b I’m finally

getting your attention

all it took was 4 me 2 get sick

a heart condition

but look listen

that aint the part that matters

lets kiss an make up an cease

all this chatter

cause I know they gone call an

u gone start running an

my heart gone be drumming an

my mind going numb an

woah wait the machines going crazy

my heart is broken bout 2 burst

but your presence saves me

but you the reason I’m n here an lately

u been acting different

I know its just a phase

you hate 2 c me breathless an laying weak 4 days

so why u keep lying why u keep cheating

why u keep me crying its getting harder 2 breathe an

I’m love sick

how do I let it go

whether you love me or you leave me

its gone shatter my soul

why cant u love me rite why cant u give me what I need

why cant I accept that & just get the courage 2 leave

how cud you break my heart an force me 2 pick up the pieces alone

what’s the use its killing me anyway so y should i move on





I’m love sick



an i cant get well

you my earthly heaven wit a side dish of hell

I’m love sick

you’re my cure you’re my disease

so i guess I’ll just rest

an wait 4 u 2 finish me



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