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Rated: E · Poetry · Experience · #1735735
A piece written in my early days depicting my tender thoughts. Would love to be reviewed.
These swift passing days
Adorned with melodies
And the tune it plays
Is what youth sees.

But I can see even more
A dizzy, lonely way
And fortune gropes the core
Practicing a sway.

Colours are all perished
Evenings boycott the twilight
And the salt that tears shed
End up my heart's sweet fight.

I tried to learn the nonsense
Alas! I failed to do so.
Still twilight plays above the fence
Who had a nonsense go.

Fortune sweeps my beloved thoughts
And nearers leave me lonely
I can see in dreamy caughts
Driving all along solely.
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