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by Javad
Rated: E · Essay · Community · #2014145
Is it pointless to keep our traditional way of life alive?
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When a country develops its technology, the traditional skills and ways of life die out. It is pointless to try and keep them alive.

To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?



There has always been a special certain focus on whether it or not it is pointless to try to keepsustaining the traditional ways of life or not in the realm of sociology science. Although it is undeniable that technology has an increasingly massive effect impact on the ways people live and of course how they think, and may consequently die out the traditional skills, but knowing that our traditional way of life is part of our identity and unforgettable like our names, surely it is not to try to keep them alive. [You really need to learn the art of breaking down your sentences]

According to Dr. Garry, a sociologist,: "Tradition is the most implacable thing in the world like our mother tongue"." May beMaybe technology has changed the way people live nowadays, but it doesn't necessarily mean that they have forgotten their tradition and the way they had been living withtheir former lifestyle. For instantinstance, may be maybe the Internet and social-networkssocial networking websites like Facebook and, Twitter, etc. has have completely changedrevolutionized the way people communicate with each other, but it surely sure hasn't changed their behavior attitude and the way they used topreviously talk talked to each otherwith one another.

From the other perspective itIt is also important to know that may be the hustle and bustle of the modern society with terribly massive progress in technology made us so busy that we can't spend as much time as we had been spending on our traditions, there are still lots of traditions in every single society and more than 40% of the people in each society abide by them, like celebrating new year in each society, religious beliefs and participating in religious kinds of gathering from time to time. [This paragraph needs an exhaustive revision]

Contrastively, there are is a group of people who think that it is pointless to try to keep traditional ways of life alive because we have to adapt ourselves with the new eratimes and change our way. , neverthelessNevertheless, we should know acknowledge the fact that traditions, in essence, are like our nameshape our identity, and we should absolutely never change it in different situations.

In the endLastly, traditions are are the intrinsic part of our identity, and just like our given names, we never forget itthem. knowingKnowing that may be very huge progress in technology has affected the way we live, but never can it changes completely [I couldn't make head or tail of this sentence]. Trying to keep them alive, by very short time we will have got our old traditions alive [Again, what are you trying to imply?].





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