Outline Revision 2

Climax 1:Aaron takes Jill to a BDSM club and coerces her into participation
Conflict 1:Aaron criticizes Jill’s taste in music, movies, tv, food etc.
Conflict 2:Aaron’s jealousy shows when he sees Jill laughing with another man
Conflict 3:Jill goes out with Mary and Amara, and ends up making-out with Marcus
Conflict 4:Aaron seduces and coerces Jill back into a relationship
Conflict 5:Jill rebels against Aaron’s wishes at a Labor Day picnic
Conflict 6:Aaron takes Jill’s virginity on the night of her birthday, and leaves her to spend the night alone
Conflict 7:After Jill agrees to go home with Aaron for Thanksgiving she learns more about his elitistism
Climax 2:Jill reports Aaron to the disciplinary committee
Conflict 1:Aaron stalks Jill until Marcus disables the GPS locater in her phone
Conflict 2:After she files the report with the disciplinary committee Aaron confronts her, and tries to get her to retract the complaint through force and threats.
Conflict 3:When force and threats fail Aaron tries to seduce her on Valentine’s Day
Climax 3:Michael Lancing expresses more than a professional interest in Jill.
Conflict 1:Mike expresses his interest in Jill when they end up on a double date on Valentine’s Day
Conflict 2:After Jill refuses his advances on Valentine’s Day he tries again the day that she completes his final
Conflict 3:Aaron threatens to report Mike to the school for inappropriate behavior with a student.
Conflict 4:Mike seduces Jill into spending the night with him after his post final exams party
Climax 4:Jill ends up torn between three men
Conflict 1;Mike loves Jill but he likes to have fun with other women
Conflict 2:Brian thinks he loves Jill, but is uncomfortable with sharing her with other men.
Conflict 3:Jill makes a connection with Jamie; a friend of Amara’s who is a transgender female to male