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Rated: E · Fiction · Fantasy · #2031291
Lefolds flls in luv with my oc lol
A/N; id dedcided to rite a story i saw lotr and omg it was lik the bestt thin everr. Lefoles is so hat. So i mad a charakter to fal in lov with him lololooll. btw i dont own Lefoliss or othr cnanon cheracters

No hate pls i workd herd on tis and i only wunt cunstruktive critismsm so i can get beter dont be men cx


K so this hapens in arond the tim when Lafoles wuz abut to go on the quest, before he went to Rivondel ok. So on day he waz wriding on his hors that he namd Arfoled kinda like Alfred but wit an o and an e befor the r so y know bt anyway he was riding Arfoled and he herd screming an crikng in da distgnce. He hureid over to the sunded and saw a girl she wuz haf dwarf (cuz theyre hat too lol) an half elf and she wuz very perty. He didnt no it ad she did nt ether but her mom was Tariel and her dad was Killi he didnt reallee die ya know. So she had on blu eye and one gren eye nd her ears wer pointed but roundr then most elfs. So y9u could tell she waz not ful elf lol an she had veen teesed fur it bfore. Sh crid and crid and Legoles askd her wut was rong.

“Why you cring?” he casked, leening over to see hr better.

“Bc Im said” she replid, looking up. “Wo who r u”

“Im Lefolis,” sid the princ, smiling thotfully. “What r u doing>”

“Im crinj idk wher i am”

“Your almost at Rivondek the house Of Elron” he replidd

“Can u help me get tere” I aked, mi blu eyres shinin in the light of te sunn

“Yeah sher” he replid “whats ur name”

“Galladriek,” I reppplid, wipping mi eyes.

“Lik the quen of Lothloren?” aked Lefolas, looking at me. He thot I wuxz beutiful. I luked like Galkedriel for who i wrs nmed. My hair wuz lung and gold an my eys were lik blu dimands that the mon had criedd tears (a/n isnt tht romantic i thot it up by myselfff XD)

“Yeah” i said “shes my ant” Tariell my mother weas her sixter no one new that thouh.

So snyway we went o Rivondek an Lefoles asnd I falled into lov. We kised vefore hew went to the Concel of Erkok.

(A/N: did u like it i wil rite more laterz k i hav sk00l))
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