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Rated: 13+ · Interview · Music · #2061620
Just some lyrics I wrote. Please review. I need the criticism.
Walls

(Chorus)
I'm all alone,
This doesn't feel like home.
Can someone save me?
I need your help,
I need to escape this living hell.
Will you save me?
I don't feel safe behind these walls,
This pain is making them fall.

(Verse 1)
I won't let you in
Because you'll judge my sins
You say you'll be my friend
But you'll walk away in the end

I know how bad that sounds
But I'm tightly wound
I've seen storms come around
I've seen them rip through this town

You say you'll always stay
But that's what they always say

(Chorus)
I'm all alone,
This doesn't feel like home.
Can someone save me?
I need your help,
I need to escape this living hell.
Will you save me?
I don't feel safe behind these walls,
This pain is making them fall.

(Verse 2)
I can't begin to talk about my depression
But through that, music became my obsession
I wouldn't call this a confession
But your loyalty, I'll always question

I wish I could learn to trust you
But trust is something you have to prove
Because I know what it's like to lose
I know what it's like to be used

You say you'll never go
But how am I to know

(Chorus)
I'm all alone,
This doesn't feel like home.
Can someone save me?
I need your help,
I need to escape this living hell.
Will you save me?
I don't feel safe behind these walls,
This pain is making them fall.

(Bridge)
These walls are crumbling,
Their crashing down on me.
I'm trying to escape,
Hoping you don't leave.
These walls are crumbling,
Seems like I won't survive.
I'm trying to escape,
I might be buried alive.

(Chorus)
I'm all alone,
This doesn't feel like home.
Can someone save me?
I need your help,
I need to escape this living hell.
Will you save me?
I don't feel safe behind these walls,
This pain is making them fall.
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