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Rated: E · Poetry · Romance/Love · #2103639
Haikus for Romeo, from Romeo and Juliet. Actual feedback needed!
This is for a major grade, so I definitely need a lot of constructive feedback! Thank you~



The dank summer dew
bubbles on the grass like love.
Juliet, love me? ❀


All eyes on my love.
She looks so, so beautiful.
All eyes, but my own. ✞

She is like the Sun.
Everyone can see her.
​Yet, the stars cannot. ❂
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