*Magnify*
SPONSORED LINKS
Printed from https://www.writing.com/main/view_item/item_id/212399-Turning-awaypart-2-Eyes-full-of-rain
Rated: ASR · Poetry · Emotional · #212399
Continuation of the first one :-). Feedback and rate please
I try to get him to
Talk,
But his mouth won't move
And
Tears fill his eyes.

I Start to sob out of
Frustration,
And he grabs me to him
And holds on tight,
Crying all of his emotions out
Onto my shoulders.

Finally he looks at
Me.
The shadows in his eyes have lessened,
Only to be replaced by
regret.

He touches my face
Tenderly,
Sniffling from time to time.
He smiles sadly and says
"I'll always love you"

Then he kisses my head,
Says goodbye and
Turns away
Leaving me alone
With eyes full of rain.
© Copyright 2001 KristinM (kristinm at Writing.Com). All rights reserved.
Writing.Com, its affiliates and syndicates have been granted non-exclusive rights to display this work.
Log in to Leave Feedback
Username:
Password: <Show>
Not a Member?
Signup right now, for free!
All accounts include:
*Bullet* FREE Email @Writing.Com!
*Bullet* FREE Portfolio Services!
Printed from https://www.writing.com/main/view_item/item_id/212399-Turning-awaypart-2-Eyes-full-of-rain