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by Nina
Rated: 13+ · Fiction · Children's · #2158534
The oldest brother shrunk
Max woke up shrunken on a soft surface. He Remembered that he had to look over his siblings for the next week. He then just noticed that he was shrunken. He was literally the size of a salt corn. He then heard his small sister crying. He then also heard his brother standing up. His brother soon came into the room max was in. He looked at them in horror as his brother puts his sister right next to max. He could smell that her sisters diaper was once again very full. His brother didnt had much experience with changing diapers but he starts taking them off her sister. Finally max realized that he was right inside a fresh diaper! He wants to run away but his brother took the diaper. He sticked it right onto her sisters messy butt as he didnt knew that he had to clean her. Max was pushed inside of her sisters messy buttcrack as her shit sticked him in place. His sister stops crying as she got put down onto the ground again. Its usually not normal for a girl in her age to still wear diapers but she loved how they feel around her butt. Max was now stuck between his own sisters messy butt. He tried to wiggle out but he was completly stuck. Lukily for the kids, they're mother cooked for them for a whole week they just had to warm it up. Max was stuck till lunchtime as her sister starts to get hungry. She went into the kitchen to grab some food. She opened the fridge filled with premade food. Her sister grabbed a bowel filled with rice mixed with beans and vegtables. She puts some into a small plate as she puts the rest back and the plate into the microwave. She waited till the food was warm. She took the plate out and sat down and started to eat. She ate the whole plate empty and afterwards placed it into the sink. She then proceeds to go back into her room. The walking pressed maxes body as he screamed around,but nobody hears him. Later her sister stomach begun to rumble. She then lets out a nasty fart that pins max onto her diaper. She continues to fart as her farts starts to get wetter by any second. Then the worst thing for max happened. Her sister started to poop into her diaper! Max was greeted with a huge log comming out of her anus. It pins max under it as she proceeds to poop. Max gets buried under her waste. Max couldnt breath as he was forced to eat his way out. After he reached the point that he could breath again he passed out. After a while he woke up by anotherone of her sisters fart. She was having a stomach ache as she then called his brother. As he heard that she got a stomach ache he grabbed a bottle of laxative. He didnt know how much he should give her so he just gave her a table spoon full. Clearly it was way too much for such a girl. After a bit she holds her stomach once again and bends over. She start to hhave diarrhea as she shits like hell. Max got hit by her waste as he gots pushed back onto the diaper. She was literally turning her diaper brown. After she was done her diaper was about to leak out. Her brother came once again to change her diapers. That was max chance to escape as he starts running put of the diaper as soon his brother took them off. He could closely escape as his brother threw the diaper away. Max looked at his brother as he then jumped at him. He was wearing a broken jeans,a levi hoodie and his nike shoes. Max landed on his brothers left leg as he slipped inside of the jeans by a hole. He was now above his shoe as he walked into his room. Max jumped onto his shoe and onto the floor. The floor was cobered with clothes,bottles and other stuff he can recognize. His brother took his phone out as he starts to call his friends."yeah one week! We can do a sleepover by me we will game all night!"max heard repeating his brother saying multiple times. After heis brother puts his phone away he starts to"clean up" and that means he starts to push everything under his bed. Max saw how he stood up and bend down. Max then couldnt react as his small brother pushed him with his unwashed clothes under his bed. The got pessed against the wall as his brother continues to put stuff under his bed. After his brother pushed the rest of his clothes under the bed he vanished to get some smacks. That was max's moment to escape. He had to climb up the pile of clothes and onto his brothers bed that was the only way to get away from his spot. Max then starts to climb up the giant pile of clothes and dirt. With his size it took an hour to climb up to the bed. As he finally reached the top he passes out from exhaustion. He then suddenly woke up by the sound of the door open as his brother came back. Max saw his brother hilding a bunch of bags full of snacks and drink as he puts it on his desk where the consoles are. Max stood up but then his brother sits down onto his bed sending max flying. Max landed on the carpet in the middle of the room. Because max just pushed his stuff under the bed was the carpet still full with crumbs and stains of spilled drinks. Max thought that this nightmare never ends because it was only Monday! Then the door rung as the first group of max's friend came. His brother went and opened the door. The 5 boys came in as they ranged between 10 and 13. - just kick your shoes somewhere – he said as they did what he said and kicked theyre shoes wild into the room giggling. His brother got the biggest room compared to his family's rooms so there was alot of room for his friends. The friends all placed theyre sleeping bags on the ground as one almost hits max. Max was terrified as he saw the huge boys above him but he decides to climb up the bag. They boys went to the desk as they started one of the consoles. Meanwhile max looked around seeing the boys shoes in the corner and the boys distracted. He lools at the door as he thought that he could finally escape as then the door opened once again as another group came in. They all looked like they were around his brothers age. His brother repeated what he said earlier as they also kicked theyre shoes inti the room. They placed theyre sleeping bags on the available place as they also went to the desk. Max was shocked as there were now around 14 kids in the room and they all just brought theyre bags and nothing else. Then suddenly max heard panting as then another boy came into the room. His body was drenched in sweat. He looked at the boys – sorry i had soccer practice- the boy said. His brother giggled and also said to him that he can kick his shoes off. The boy had an expresion of relief in his face as he kicked his shoes off like it was a soccer ball. Unlucky for max was that one of his shoes landed on him with the opening above his head. Max teared up as he smelled the powerful odor comming of the shoe. Then he heard how the boy stepped on the bag he stood on as he then kicked the shoe with max to the others. Max was right ontop of the pile as the starts to get dizzy. All of the shoes smelled awful smelly,but what would you expect in a hot summer day. The boy then locked the door as he joins the group. Max jumps off of the pile as he hurts his legs when he landed. He couldnt run anymore because it would hurt too much. He then inspected each of the boys socked feets. Max couldnt see the soles of them but he saw that the part that almost is the sole was shiny,meaning they worn them for a bit. Max was smelling the shoes behind him as he looked for another place to stay. Max looked at the nearest sleeping bag,it was the only safe place that he could go. Max was very tired as the time went. He walked towards the bag as he falls asleep at the opening. They boys played till 2 am till they decides to sleep. They all went to theyre bags as max woke up by the earthquake they cause. Then the youngest under the boy went to his bag that max layed on. He was just 9 and worn a black jogging pants, a stripped t-shirt and pokemon ball socks. The boy Lift his bag up causing max to fall into the bag. The boy then goes in with his left leg first giving max a good view of his cheesy socked foot. The socks were dirty and shining from his sweat. The boy pinned max under his foot as he puts his other leg in. The smell hits max right into his nose as he then got pinned with his sweaty socks. The boy then layed down as max got away from his foot. Max then walks towards the exit by walking on the side of the boys leg. Surprisingly Max could this time as all of the boys felt asleep. As max stood on the floor. He sighs in relief but then his brothers naked yellow feets were above him. His brother wanted to grab a glas of water in the kitchen so he stood up…on max. Max got stuck to his little brother yellow foot as it just smelled like sweat around him. He got pressed against his foot as his brother went to fetch some water. His foot got dirty by the way dowstairs. After his brother drunk he goes back into the bed trying to not wake someone up. He managed to to that but max wasnt able to get humself free. As his brother falls asleep again he tried to escape. He looked around him but it was too dark to see anything. After a while max stopped trying and felt asleep aswell. He then woke up by the fall he made as the sweat of his brothers foot made him unstuck of his prison,but he smelled an more intense sweat smell around him.. he felt the soft ground under him as he noticed that he landed on his brothers nike socks. His brother took them of before he slept because it was too hot. Max had to hold his nose as the odor was just too strong for him. His eyes teared up as he then heard how the boys woke up…and also his brother. They woke up by the sound of the doorbell. His brother stood up and took his socks on pressing poor max under his sole once again. He sprinted down as he took his sister with. At the door was her mothers best friend ready to look after max sister. He gave her his sister and went back to his friends again. Max got crushed under his sweaty sole. There was no way that max could come out of the hell he was in. He was trapped in there for 3 days as he got drenched in sweat and his lungs were filled with his brothers odor. On Thursday even the boys couldnt handle theyre own odor as they decided to go to the swimming pool. But they took all theyre socks off and placed them into a air sealed bag including max. The boys wanted to make theyre socks as smelly as possible and thats why they put them into the air sealed bag. Max was really suffering as it was really har for him to breath. He couldnt take the smell of sweat anymore as he passed out. As he woke again he was once again pressed on a foot,but this time it was from his brothers best friend mika. Mikas foot was very dirty and twice as bad as his brothers,maybe because they all worn theyre shoes barefooted. Mika was playing against max's brother as he pressed his feet against the floor in excitement. Max heard how his bones broke. He was under the boys foot for the rest of the week as everyday it got worst. The boys took the socks off and traded them back to theyre owners so max jumped out before his brother grabbed his socks and crawled to the laundry under his brothers bed. Max waited there as he was happy that he finally was safe. He then falls asleep. After a good rest max woke up suddenly seeing his mom infront of him. She was already back home as max missed her arrival. It looked like she was back from her daily jogging as she sweated all over her body. She was on her waz to the washing mashine as she kneed down to put the laundry in. With a perfect jump max was able to jump out landing onto her left running shoe
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