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Rated: E · Book · Drama · #2319583

An experimental collection of exactly 100 words (mostly)

#1091309 added June 12, 2025 at 7:09am
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Who Changed You?
My sweet child,
With rosy cheeks, sparkling eyes
A rough and tumble fun loving boy,
Bright in school, with infinite potential.
Your heart is as big as the sky.
There was never a sour day with you in itโ€ฆ
Until now.
Who changed you?
When did bitterness sink into your soul,
Rotting you from the inside out?
Who broke your spirit, feeding you lies
Turning you into a cynical nihilistic boor?
You were once proudly straight edge,
Now you smell like skunks
With endless nonsensical excuses
For why you've abandoned your life.
I don't understand.
Who soiled my angel's wings?


Words: 100.
Written for Rachel's Beatles Challenge.
Chosen song: While My Guitar Gently Weeps


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