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Rated: 18+ · Book · Women's · #1954602
I am posted my response to MHWA Mental Health Challenge to this journal.
#922841 added October 28, 2017 at 6:46pm
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Ars Poetic: Unsatisfied
I have written this title before
inspired by various poets,
but I am unsatisfied
with each attempt.

Unsatisfied,
with each poem,
I rewrite,
I put them away,
I look at them later,
and realize
I am unsatisfied
with the improvement:
I am left wondering
if I have improved the ode.

Today,
I recognized the reason
I am unsatisfied!

The poems
do not speak from my soul,
they are neither metaphors nor similes
for my love of God,
His Glory,
or any Divine Manifestation.

Line Count: 23
Form: Free style - similar to free verse, but with some rhyme.

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