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A blog on my personal writing process. Just random thoughts, notes, and other stuff. Don’t know yet what that will be like. Am exploring possibilities and pulse towards an unknown future. Let’s find out! Here are challenges and activities stored.

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October 6, 2021 at 5:37am
October 6, 2021 at 5:37am
#1018776


Oct. 06: - Plot: Rising Action (How does the story get there?) ▼

Review your notes from the ""Premise"" and ""Beginning"" plot exercises, and tweak the conflict(s) and inciting incident as needed before proceeding with the ""Rising Action"" plot exercise, as follows:

(1) Describe any initial refusals on the part of your protagonist(s) to face the conflict.
(2) Describe the moment when your protagonist(s) makes the choice to face the conflict.
(3) Describe the moment when your protagonist(s) crosses the point of no return and cannot change their mind.
(4) Fill in some of the blanks: How will your characters get from the point of no return to the climax?


Premise, Beginning, Conflicts, Inciting Incident, Rising Action.   in Freytag's Pyramid.

Conflict: Between Wolf and monsters.

Rising Action:
Initial refusals of Wolf facing the conflict. He faces the mysterious phenomenons, and it takes some time for him to recognize they are all there because of the Book, and Poppy reminds him of the Book.

The moment Wolf makes the choice to face the conflict. He chooses to go to China to investigate Book. That's where he sees the monsters.

The moment Wolf crosses the point of no return, and cannot change his mind. When he is forced to battle the monsters, or he will be killed.

How will Wolf get from the point of no return to the climax?
(PNR is when he goes to battle the monsters. Climax is when he solves the riddle and saves Los Angeles.)
The answer is the Book. By defeating the monsters, he gets into another state of mind and reads the Book differently. The message he can now read in the Book (the riddle) is explained to him, and he now knows how to save Los Angeles.

In China, he is introduced to a university professor Xiao Tan who helps him with the translation of the Book. The three of them follow instructions of the Book and roam through Beijing. There the monsters take form and are visible to all three (Wolf, Poppy, Xiao).




October 5, 2021 at 12:59am
October 5, 2021 at 12:59am
#1018726


Oct. 05: - Plot: Climax (Where is the story going?) ▼

Where is your story going? Describe the climax, the point at which everything changes and the tension of the primary conflict is finally resolved. Use the ""What If"" brainstorming exercise to create a list of possibilities, remembering to consider the growth of / change in your main character(s) as a result of this event. The climax can be as hidden and seemingly tiny as that moment when your character finally makes that decision they've been dreading or avoiding for fifteen chapters, or it can be as huge and obvious as an exploding planet. Sometimes, the climax is a little hard to pin down. Was it the moment Ender won his game? Or was it the moment he realized the moving images on his screen were not a simulation, not the game he thought it was, and that he had just personally wiped out an entire alien race?


The Climax. Possibilities.

The point of no return that where everything changes, where the primary conflict is resolved must be at the end of the novel where Wolf and Poppy solve the riddle in the Book, take out the ancient monsters, and save the city of Los Angeles (what-if).

I don't know the riddle yet, and I don't know how they will take out the monsters. *Sad*

Changed the title into The Shanhaijing Prophecy!

Conflict in a story  

October 4, 2021 at 3:38am
October 4, 2021 at 3:38am
#1018659


Oct. 04: - Plot: Beginning (Where does your story start?) ▼

(1) Describe your protagonist's life in the beginning (""Ordinary World"" or ""Stasis"") of the story. Brainstorm ways you could establish normality through action and dialog to avoid boring your reader.


Wolf Meyer's Ordinary world is described in "Backstory Protagonist - Contest entry.
A fairly ordinary guy is living his life in Los Angeles with a new dog. He is a bike courier by day and a poet by night.

How to establish normality through action and dialog? (Do not bore the reader!)

By his funny dialogue with his dog Brigadier while feeding him. […]
By his witty dialog with neighbors while leaving or entering the apartment. […]
By his funny talk with customers while delivering packages and folders. […]
By his witty dialog with neighbors while walking Brigadier. […]
By citing funny quotes or jokes whenever he got the chance. [Have you ever noticed that anybody driving slower than you is an idiot, and anyone going faster than you is a maniac? - George Carlin; If toast always lands butter-side down, and cats always land on their feet, what happens if you strap toast on the back of a cat and drop it? Steven Wright; Crocodiles are easy. They try to kill and eat you. People are harder. Sometimes they pretend to be your friend first. - Steve Irwin;]



Blog on Spicing up Dialog  

(2) Describe the inciting incident or trigger ("Call to Adventure") that prompts your protagonist(s) to embark on this story's journey (whether literal or metaphorical) and face the conflict. This incident could be large and obvious like a death or disaster, or it could be seemingly insignificant, such as an offhand comment by another character.

After purchasing the book and meeting Poppy, there are a few trigger incidents that prompt him to take on this journey to investigate and leave for China.

Call to Adventure:
- When Wolf feels the urge to buy the Book at the auction. (first call)

- There is a fire in the basement while nobody is in the house; Poppy's cat is missing, and Wolf's dog gets a freaky accident. They experience mysterious phenomenons like knocking sounds in the middle of the night, pawprints in the bathroom, reflections in mirrors. They trace the incidents back to the Book.(second call)

- Wolf wins 100,000 dollars in the lottery. He can quit his job and investigate in China with Poppy. (Accidental, deliberate, or divine intervention?)(third call)

October 3, 2021 at 4:33am
October 3, 2021 at 4:33am
#1018583


Oct. 03: - Character: Protagonist Profile ▼

Draft a profile of your protagonist. Include detailed information such as name, age, physical attributes, occupation, education, culture, religion, family, relationship status, personality, likes, dislikes, strengths, weakness, motivations and desires.

Use Google Images to find an image of your character. The point of this exercise is for you to get to know your character inside and out before you write your novel. If you don't know your character, how can you expect it of your readers? Flesh out your pre-story character in detail. Keep in mind that your protagonist will grow in some way during your story.

For more serious character profilers, here is are two optional, very extensive templates: "Character Interview / Profile Sheet"   and "(Another, Very) In-Depth Character Profile"   . Also, here is a "Traits List"   to draw from.


Name: Wolf Meyer
Age: 35, October 4, 1986, Zodiac sign Libra
Physical attributes: slim, blond half-long hair, week-old beard
Occupation: bike courier, poet, and male escort
Education: high school, few years university
Culture: American, caucasian
Religion: none, agnostic
Family: three brothers younger than him, Bob, Edgar, Spike, parents
Relationship status: single
Friends: Marvin, Pete, Simon
Pets: a dog named Brigadier, cocker spaniel, four years old
Personality: gullible, sweet, caring, funny,
Likes: history, other cultures, friends, Los Angeles, where he lives, his job, cooking
Dislikes: dishonesty
Strengths: adventurous
Weakness: too trusting
Motivations: life, friends, his dog
Desires:to save the world, to fall in love



Photo Wolf Meyer  

On character profiling  
October 2, 2021 at 12:01pm
October 2, 2021 at 12:01pm
#1018529


Oct. 9: - CONTEST ROUND: Protagonist Background Story ▼

Write a story about your protagonist that takes place outside of your novel. Make your readers relate to him or her in such a way that we would be devastated if he or she were to experience conflict (which, ultimately, sometime in November, he/she will.) The object of the contest is to make your judges root for your protagonist! Simply put: the character we like best wins. If your protagonist is a drug dealer or someone similarly "unlikeable" (a.k.a, an "anti-hero"), never fear! I love Vlad Taltos, the professional assassin. You can make us love your character, too.

*Contest Round entries may be any rating. Submit your ITEM or ENTRY number by 1200 noon WDC time on Sunday to compete. WDC time is New York City time and can be found at the top of the IM Console. If you miss this deadline or choose not to compete, you must still log the assignment complete (without linking your work) for the grand prize, per the standard Prep guidelines.


Backstory 412 words; deadline Sunday, October 10, 2021

Now-thirty-five-year-old Wolf Meyer fell in love with the City of Angels as soon as he visited for the first time. He intended to stay for a long weekend after the summer, but he inhaled the beauty of Los Angeles and decided then and there to rent a room for a month.

Three years later and he was still in town, struggling to meet ends meet as a bike courier, sure, but living life in this fascinating and complex city. Beyond the perpetual sunshine, the beaches with flaunting bodies and surfers always in for the perfect waves, palm trees, and movie stars, there were art museums, architecture, parks and gardens, and a mosaic of cultures living side by side in peace in a setting by the sea to die for.

In short, Los Angeles was hot, and he was thrilled to be part of it.

As he rode his bike with caution avoiding cabs and commuters, his mind wandered off to the pooch he'd left behind in his apartment. Brigadier was a stray from a shelter, a brown dachshund with an attitude like a general, hence the name. His first week having a dog had gone by so fast, and now he had to work outside the house, leaving the dog on his own.

That morning, Brigadier had looked at him with such sad eyes Wolf almost laughed out loud.

"No, buddy, daddy has to work and earn some cash, or there will be no food in your bowl."

When he slammed the door, he almost felt guilty.

Hawthorne Boulevard was busy as he maneuvered with speed to be on time at his destination. His first stop was at the office to fetch deliveries; within half an hour, he was back on the saddle again, appreciating the morning sun.

He picked up an enjoyable pace and peddled his first round of the day. His blond half-long hair was moving in the wind, squinting eyes behind dark sunglasses—a hunk on wheels.

Wolf knew he was a good-looking guy, as he found out a year ago when he registered as a male escort at G-E-N-T-L-E_M-E-N-c-a-l-l-e-r-s 0500-3489. He especially was good with older women. Twice a week, he was summoned to an unknown lady with three hours to spend at her beck and call. He liked his evening job, and it paid the extra buck he needed to pay for his vice, going to auctions and bid on something for his book collection.

Life was good.



Photo Wolf Meyer  



October 2, 2021 at 3:51am
October 2, 2021 at 3:51am
#1018510


Oct. 02: - Plot: Premise ▼

Now that you've brainstormed the general story idea, let's identify some story elements:
(1) Setting(s). Where does your story take place?
(2) Protagonist(s). Who is(are) your main character(s)?
(2b) Flaw(s). What is(are) the protagonist's major flaw(s)?
(2c) Goal(s). What does(d) the protagonist(s) want (or want to avoid)?
(3) Conflict(s). What's keeping them from their goal(s)?
(4) Antagonist(s). Who or what is creating the conflict(s)?

Just for fun: Write a provocative one-sentence description of your story.

Example: ""A young, mistreated orphan discovers he is a wizard and must face the evil villain Voldemort to fulfill his destiny.""

Wikipedia’s definition of Narrative Conflict  


The story takes place in Los Angeles, USA, and China. (Use of Lonely Planet Guides)

The main characters are Wolf and Poppy, who met at an auction.

The main characters' flaws are gullibility (Wolf) and deceptiveness (Poppy). In the end, Poppy betrays Wolf, and he never sees it coming.

They want to examine the ancient Book and avoid the destruction of Los Angeles and the world.

The conflict is between mystery forces who want the Book as well and the Monsters that come alive.

The antagonists are the man or woman who follows them and the Monsters that keep appearing.

In the end, Poppy is also an antagonist.


Log-line: A 2020-year-old book causing occult phenomenons leads Wolf and Poppy on an adventure in mysterious China where they defeat ancient monsters to save their world.



October 1, 2021 at 8:37am
October 1, 2021 at 8:37am
#1018469


Oct. 01: - Plot: What If? ▼

Every good story starts with a 'what if'. What if a young boy discovers he's a wizard? What if a girl discovers a world hidden inside her wardrobe? What if there was a cemetery where pets came back to life if they were buried there? What if dinosaurs were real again?

In this exercise, imagine your story and your main character(s). Who is(are) the character(s)? Why do we care about them? What happens to them, and why is it a problem? (If it's not a problem, it's just life, not a story. *Wink*)

Spend at least 15 minutes imagining all the possibilities in your story. Make a list of every possible 'what if' you can think of. Nothing is off-limits here - let your brain go.


Answers to questions & List what if's (15 minutes with timer)


- Wolf Meyer and Poppy Ryan meet at an auction in Los Angeles. He will buy an item, an old Chinese book; she is writing an article about auctions. It clicks. They meet again, and then things start to become weird. There is a fire in the basement while nobody is in the house; Poppy's cat is missing, and Wolf's dog gets a freaky accident. They experience mysterious phenomenons like knocking sounds in the middle of the night, pawprints in the bathroom, reflections in mirrors. They investigate the cause of the trouble: the Chinese book. They travel to China and encounter several monsters described in the book. (…) In Los Angeles, they have to react fast to change the chain of events and save the city from harm.

What if…
# somebody else wanted to buy the book but wasn't there on time
# the book was too expensive for Wolf
# Wolf is a male escort instead of a poet
# Wolf never met Poppy
# They were followed when leaving the auction with the book
# They didn't believe the occult phenomenons
# he wins a lot of money in the lottery so he can travel to China
# the monsters in China were real
# the monsters in China were hallucinations

# they couldn't save the city
# they could save the city
# Poppy turns out to be one of them
# the book got destroyed
# Poppy and the book disappeared

September 29, 2021 at 5:31am
September 29, 2021 at 5:31am
#1018255
PREP Challenge OCTOBER

Working Title: The Shanhaijing Prophecy or The Modern World Monsters.

PLOT1 & 2 interwoven.

Plot1: A 2020-year-old Chinese book shows up at an auction. The main character, Wolf Meyer buys it cheap because no one recognizes its significance to the world. He meets a girl, Poppy Ryan. Strange events occur in their lives (the house is suddenly set on fire, pets disappear, the main character experiences occult phenomenons like knocking sounds in the middle of the night, pawprints in the bathroom, reflections in mirrors). Together they investigate in China. They meet monsters. Book predicts a deadline for a major disaster that hits their city (Los Angeles?) and will kill many people. Can they stop the prophecy?

Plot2: The story of the ancient book Shanhaijing, The Book of Mountains and Seas revealed. An extraordinary encyclopedia containing strange and terrifying creatures that the Ancient Chinese believed existed on Earth.

Bibliography
The Mythology Bible (2009) by Sarah Bartlett p.292-293
China, Lonely Planet, 2017
USA, Lonely Planet, 2004
The book of Mountains and Seas, 1999, Penguin Classic
https://karkadann.fandom.com/wiki/Classic_of_Mountains_and_Seas
https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Classic_of_Mountains_and_Seas
https://totallyhistory.com/shan-hai-jing/
https://novelmao.com/chapter/world-of-immortals-shan-hai-jing-1/
September 24, 2021 at 1:40pm
September 24, 2021 at 1:40pm
#1017971
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September 10, 2021 at 5:03pm
September 10, 2021 at 5:03pm
#1017198
I signed in for
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to plan my NaNoWriMo novel in October before writing it in November. An ambitious plan this year. Especially since I haven't done much writing, not even in my blog.

But I want to be prepared.

Last year I just wrote a novel in 30 days flying by the seat of my pants, this year I want to do more research in advance. I am very curious about what that will bring me. Which take will work the best for me?

I've got a working title: Shanhaijing Now. Reference to a very famous Asian book from decades ago. The Shanhaijing, The Book of Mountains and Seas may be more than 2,000 years old. It's an extraordinary encyclopedia containing strange and terrifying creatures that the Ancient Chinese believed existed on Earth. (The Mythology Bible by Sarah Bartlett, p. 292-293}
https://karkadann.fandom.com/wiki/Classic_of_Mountains_and_Seas

Why this title?

It just sounds good.

I don't know. I may change it during these two months.

It can be an action novel, a cultural and mysterious story. That's all I got so far.

worldbuilding template  

"Fairy tales do not give the child his first idea of bogey. What fairy tales give the child is his first clear idea of the possible defeat of bogey. The baby has known the dragons intimately ever since he had an imagination. What the fairy tale provides for him is a St. George to kill the dragon." ― G.K. Chesterton, Tremendous Trifles
November 19, 2020 at 4:04pm
November 19, 2020 at 4:04pm
#998715

This pandemic year began in the Netherlands, Europe on March 13 when our Prime Minister announced that during that weekend bars and restaurants would be closed and a partial lockdown was installed. It was called Intelligent lockdown which boiled down to: take your responsibility, wash your hands frequently, avoid mass gatherings, and practice social distancing. Wearing masks was questionable at that time.

As soon as I heard I made arrangements to live with my stepmom of 86 years old, in another city. I stayed with her from March 16 on, for three weeks was the idea. 6 months later I was home. The pandemic took its time.

In the beginning, I was afraid. We didn’t know much about the virus, the whole situation was completely new to everybody and we stayed indoors as much as possible. The first four months we self-quarantined, I only left the house to do the grocery shopping and to walk my dog.

It was not always easy taking care of a 86 year-old with severe memory problems and some physical ailments during a pandemic. The diagnosis was NOT dementia but old age, but the symptoms were the same. My stepmom was very forgetful, within minutes things would slip her mind. So, I had to repeat a lot and wasn’t able to hold a real conversation with her. Not easy! But, because I was her caretaker I was busy just doing that. It helped me focus on other things besides COVID-19, which was good. Luckily she took a daily nap so I had two hours every day to write and be active on WdC. Daily blogging saved my life!

After six months it was time for me to go home and my stepmom tried living on her own again. She is doing great, by the way, so no worries there.

When I arrived at my place two and a half months ago, I was more than happy and relieved to be on my own again. I couldn’t wait. And it has been bliss. I live in my COVID-free bubble. I don’t leave the house other than walking the dog five times a day. I have my groceries delivered and I avoid other people. I talk with friends and family on the phone and online. Still self-quarantined.

So, now I am writing 24/7 with only a break sleeping a couple of hours every night. I am extremely busy and loving every minute of it. COVID-19 is something at the back of my mind but not in my face any longer.

I call my stepmom daily to check on her. Furthermore, I am a volunteer for the Red Cross, which means calling an 83-year old lonely neighbor every day and having a chat. That’s what I am doing for the past 9 months now.

The rest of my time I am writing, reading, reviewing, or active on Writing.com.

I have my newspaper, books, music, and DVDs to keep me entertained when I need to. I keep myself busy knowing that I am a risk factor for COVID due to being a diabetic, type II. I try to live my life as healthy as I can, but I am slightly overweight and don’t exercise enough other than five short walks with my dog every day.

I don’t travel, and I don’t use public transport. Too risky. I have a bike. But I am not going anywhere. I stay put. I hope to live and see the day when there is a vaccine available. We are currently in the second wave!

In the meantime, I am careful, apprehensive, and generally doing okay, I guess.

But what a year! And it’s not over yet!!




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November 13, 2020 at 12:24pm
November 13, 2020 at 12:24pm
#998271
25 things I am grateful for:


*Delight*1. My dog Arie whom I love to bits
*Delight*2. The home that comforts me
*Delight*3. My bed when I am tired
*Delight*4. My computer to work on
*Delight*5. My monthly income
*Delight*6. The 1675 words every day sofar for NaNoWriMo 2020
*Delight*7. WdC for my daily fix
*Delight*8. My friends and family members (online and offline)
*Delight*9. Music that nourishes me
*Delight*10. Books and DVDs
*Delight*11. My blog to express myself
*Delight*12. My health in general
*Delight*13. My brain still functioning well
*Delight*14. Zoomies every fortnight
*Delight*15. My groceries delivery’s service
*Delight*16. To be of help to my neighbor when I call her every day for 9 months now
*Delight*17. That my brother tested negative for Covid two times
*Delight*18. That I didn’t catch Covid sofar
*Delight*19. Being born in The Netherlands, Europe
*Delight*20. For the changing of the seasons
*Delight*21. Electricity, water, and gas in my apartment
*Delight*22. For the joy in writing
*Delight*23. For my daily food and drinks
*Delight*24. For waking up every morning
*Delight*25. For the reading glasses that I need

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October 29, 2020 at 7:35am
October 29, 2020 at 7:35am
#997066

I don't really know what got into me, but I signed up for NaNoWriMo 2020. It's a cool site and I got my first badge and diploma for doing the tutorial. If you're used to the WritingML of WdC then it's easy to navigate their site.

It starts Sunday, November 1st, and ends November 30th. The goal is to write 50,000 words in 30 days. That's a close 1675 words per day. Oops!

I've signed in for "NaNoWriMo Write-A-Thon [ASR] to monitor the process.

I've prepped a little making a folder for Appropriate Time, which is the title of my new novel.

Plot and Outline:

A space-opera (adventure Sfi) story about the nature of loneliness. It kicks off inside a dream with a chase through the stars.

The year 2541. People don't really communicate in this dark society anymore. They are scared and lonely avoiding any contact. Assassin Cuin doesn't care for anybody or anything in the world. He gets an assignment to kill funny swindler Thruce who is considered a threat to the system because he makes people think and laugh while robbing them blind. But who's a threat to whom and who's got the last laugh?


The protagonist and the second character, as well as the setting and the antagonists, are known to me.

But that's about it.

I am already a little apprehensive, 3 days before the event. I hope I will succeed in meeting my daily goals. As long as I try and keep remembering to have some fun, then I am good to go.

I don't think I will be begging for sponsors though, too awkward considering it's my first time trying to write that many words.

A novel! Who would have thought? I hope I am ready!*Smile*

October 23, 2020 at 8:46pm
October 23, 2020 at 8:46pm
#996582
"Resurrection Jukebox [E]



My sweet Lord (1970) by George Harrison (1943-2001)

My sweet Lord
Mmm, my Lord
Mmm, my Lord

I really wanna see you
Really wanna be with you
Really wanna see you, Lord
But it takes so long, my Lord

My sweet Lord
Mmm, my Lord
Mmm, my Lord

I really wanna know you
I'd really wanna go with you
I really wanna show you, Lord
That it won't take long, my Lord

(Hallelujah)
My sweet Lord (Hallelujah)
Mmm, my Lord (Hallelujah)
My sweet Lord (Hallelujah)


I really wanna see you
Really wanna see you
Really wanna see you, Lord
Really wanna see you, Lord
But it takes so long, my Lord


(Hallelujah)
My sweet Lord (Hallelujah)
Mmm, my Lord (Hallelujah)
My, my, my Lord (Hallelujah)

I really wanna know you (Hallelujah)
Really wanna go with you (Hallelujah)
I really wanna show you, Lord
That it won't take long, my Lord

(Hallelujah)
Mmmmm (Hallelujah)
My sweet Lord (Hallelujah)
My, my Lord (Hallelujah)

Mmm, my Lord (Hare Krishna)
My, my, my Lord (Hare Krishna)
Oh, oh, my sweet Lord (Krishna Krishna)
Ooh (Hare Hare)

Now, I really wanna see you (Hare Rama)
Really wanna be with you (Hare Rama)
Really wanna see you, Lord
But it takes so long, my Lord

(Hallelujah)
Mmm, my Lord (Hallelujah)
My, my, my Lord (Hare Krishna)
My, my sweet Lord (Hare Krishna)

My sweet Lord (Krishna Krishna)
Ah, oh, my Lord (Hare Hare)
Mmmmm (Gurur Brahma)
Mmmmm (Gurur Vishnu)
Mmmmm (Gurur Devo)
Mmmmm (Maheshwara)
My sweet Lord (Gurur Sakshaat)
My sweet Lord (Para Brahma)
My, my, my Lord (Tasmayi Shree)
My, my, my, my Lord (Guruve Namah)
My, my sweet Lord (Hare Rama)
(Hare Krishna)

My sweet Lord (Hare Krishna)
My, my sweet Lord (Krishna Krishna)
My, my sweet Lord (Hare Hare)


My Sweet

Mmm, mmm
I really wanna see you
Wanna be with you
See you
But, so long!

My sweet, mmm, mmm

Wanna know you
Wanna go with you
Show you
Won't take long

Halleluja, my sweet

Wanna see you
My sweet
Mmm, my, my, my

Wanna know
Wanna go
Wanna show
It won't take long

Mmmmm, my sweet, my, my

Mmm, oh, oh, ooh

Now, I really wanna see you
really wanna be with you
Wanna see you
But, so long!

Mmm,
my, my, my, my, my

My sweet
Ah, oh, my
Mmmmm
My sweet lord.

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October 23, 2020 at 4:04pm
October 23, 2020 at 4:04pm
#996573




One (2000) by Johnny Cash (1932-2003)

Cover, writers: U2


Is it getting better
Or do you feel the same?
Will it make it easier on you, now
You got someone to blame?

You said one love, one life
When it's one need in the night
One love, we get to share it
It leaves you, baby, if you don't care for it

Did I disappoint you
Or leave a bad taste in your mouth?
You act like you never had love
And you want me to go without

Well, it's too late tonight
To drag the past out into the light
We're one, but we're not the same
We get to carry each other, carry each other
One

Have you come here for forgiveness?
Have you come to raise the dead?
Have you come here to play Jesus
To the lepers in your head?

Did I ask too much? More than a lot
You gave me nothing, now it's all I got
We're one, but we're not the same
Well, we hurt each other, and we're doing it again

You say love is a temple, love the higher law
Love is a temple, love the higher law
You ask me to enter, but then you make me crawl
And I can't be holding on to what you've got
When all you've got is hurt

One love, one blood
One life, you've got to do what you should
One life with each other
Sisters, brothers
One life, but we're not the same
We get to carry each other, carry each other
One
One

On

Is it better?
Do you feel to blame?

One life
One in the night
One love
leaves if you don't care

Did I disappoint?
Leave a bad taste?
You act like you never had me
To go without

Well, it's too late
Past out
Light
Not the same
Carry each other

On

Come here
To raise
To play in your head

I ask too much
More
Nothing
It's all I got

On

Not the same
Well, we're doing it again

Say, love
A temple, the higher law
Ask me to enter
You make me holding on
All you've got

On

Love, blood, life
Each other
Not the same
Carry each other

On.

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October 22, 2020 at 11:53am
October 22, 2020 at 11:53am
#996478




Famous Blue Raincoat (1971) by Leonard Cohen (1934-2016)

Famous Blue Raincoat

It's four in the morning, the end of December
I'm writing you now just to see if you're better
New York is cold, but
I like where I'm living
There's music on Clinton Street all through the evening
I hear that you're building
Your little house deep in the desert
You're living for nothing now
I hope you're keeping some kind of record

Yes, and Jane came by with a lock of your hair
She said that you gave it to her
That night that you planned to go clear
Did you ever go clear?

Oh, the last time we saw you you looked so much older
Your famous blue raincoat was torn at the shoulder
You'd been to the station to meet every train
But then you came home without Lili Marlene
And you treated my woman
To a flake of your life
And when she came back
She was nobody's wife

Well, I see you there with the rose in your teeth
One more thin gypsy thief
Well I see Jane's awake
She sends her regard

And what can I tell you my brother, my killer?
What can I possibly say?
I guess that I miss you. I guess I forgive you
I'm glad you stood in my way
If you ever come by here
For Jane or for me
Well, your enemy is sleeping
And his woman is free

Yes, and thanks for the trouble
You took from her eyes
I thought it was there for good
So I never tried
And Jane came by with a lock of your hair
She said that you gave it to her
That night that you planned to go clear
Sincerely, a friend

Famous Rain

It's morning, the End!

I'm writing you:
I like where I'm living
There's music I hear
Deep in the living
some kind of record

Yes, you said that night
You planned to go
Did you?

Oh, the famous rain

Been to the station
every train came without you

Life!

Well, I see you
one more gypsy
I send regard

What can I tell you, my killer?
What can I possibly say?

I miss you, I guess
I'm glad

If you ever come here
Well, sleeping is free

You took
I tried
You gave
That night

Sincerely, a friend.


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October 20, 2020 at 3:41pm
October 20, 2020 at 3:41pm
#996350
"Resurrection Jukebox [E]

White Christmas (1942) by Bing Crosby (1903-1977)



I'm dreaming of a white Christmas
Just like the ones I used to know
Where the treetops glisten

And children listen
To hear sleigh bells in the snow

I'm dreaming of a white Christmas
With every Christmas card, I write
May your days be merry and bright
And may all your Christmases be white

I'm dreaming of a white Christmas
Just like the ones I used to know, (uh, uh, uh)
Where the treetops glisten
And children listen to hear

Sleighbells in the snow
I'm dreaming of a white Christmas
With every Christmas card, I write
May your days be merry and bright...
And may all your Christmases be white...

Xmas

Dreaming of Xmas
Like the ones to know
Treetops glisten
Listen
to bells in the snow.

I'm dreaming of Xmas
I write merry and bright
All your Xmasses dreaming

uhuh, uh

The treetops glisten
Children, hear
sleighbells
in the snow

I'm dreaming
Every card I write
May your days
be bright.


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October 19, 2020 at 10:17am
October 19, 2020 at 10:17am
#996238


Me and Bobby Mc Gee (1971) by Janis Joplin (1943-1970)
Cover, written by Kris Kristofferson

Busted flat in Baton Rouge, waitin' for a train
When I's feelin' near as faded as my jeans
Bobby thumbed a diesel down just before it rained
And rode us all the way into New Orleans

I pulled my harpoon out of my dirty red bandana
I's playin' soft while Bobby sang the blues
Windshield wipers slappin' time
I's holdin' Bobby's hand in mine
We sang every song that driver knew

Freedom's just another word for nothin' left to lose
Nothin', it ain't nothin' honey, if it ain't free
And feelin' good was easy, Lord, when he sang the blues
You know feelin' good was good enough for me
Good enough for me and my Bobby McGee

From the Kentucky coal mines to the California sun
Yeah, Bobby shared the secrets of my soul
Through all kinds of weather, through everything we done
Yeah, Bobby baby kept me from the cold

One day up near Salinas, Lord, I let him slip away
He's lookin' for that home and I hope he finds it
Well, I'd trade all my tomorrows for one single yesterday
To be holdin' Bobby's body next to mine

Freedom's just another word for nothin' left to lose
Nothin', and that's all that Bobby left me
Well, feelin' good was easy, Lord, when he sang the blues
And feelin' good was good enough for me
Good enough for me and my Bobby McGee, yeah

La da da, la da daa, la da daa da daa da daa
La da da da daa dadada Bobby McGee-ah
La li daa da daa daa, la da daa da daa
La la laa la daada Bobby McGee-ah yeah
La di da, ladida LA dida LA di daa, ladida LA dida LA di daa

Hey now Bobby now now Bobby McGee yeah
Lo lo LO lolo LO lo laa, lololo LO lolo LO lolo LO lolo LO la laa
Hey now Bobby now now Bobby McGee yeah
Lord, I called him my lover, I called him my man
I said I called him my lover, did the best I can
C'mon, hey now Bobby now, hey now Bobby McGee, yeah
Lo lo Lord, a Lord, a Lord, a Lord, a Lord, a Lord, a Lord,
oh
Hey, hey, hey, Bobby McGee, Lord


Me and Bobby

Busted, waitin'
feelin' as faded as my jeans
before it rained
I pulled my dirty red
while Bobby sang the blues

Windshield wipers slappin'
that driver knew

Freedom's for nothin'
Nothin', if it ain't free
Feelin' good when he sang the blues
good enough for me and Bobby, gee

From Kentucky to California
Yeah, the secrets of my soul
All kinds of weather
everything kept me from the cold

One day I slip away
looking, I hope
Well, all my tomorrows
for one single to be holdin'

next to

Freedom, just for nothin'
That's all that left
was easy
when he sang the blues
Feelin' good
Good enough for me and Bobby, yeah

La da da, la da daa, la da daa da daa da daa
La da da da daa dadada
La li daa da daa daa, la da daa da daa
La la laa la daada
ah yeah
La di da, ladida LA dida LA di daa, ladida LA dida LA di daa

Hey now Bobby now now Bobby yeah
Lo lo LO lolo LO lo laa, lololo LO lolo LO lolo LO lolo LO la laa
Hey now Bobby now now Bobby yeah
oh hey, hey, hey, Bobby


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October 16, 2020 at 1:10pm
October 16, 2020 at 1:10pm
#996029
"Resurrection Jukebox [E]



Blue Moon (1934) by Billie Holiday (1915-1959)
Writers: Richard Rodgers and Lorenz Hart

Blue moon

You saw me standing alone
without a dream in my heart
Without a love of my own

Blue moon

You knew just what I was there for
Blue moon
You heard me saying a prayer for
Blue moon
Someone I really could care for

And then they suddenly appeared before me
The only one my arms will ever hold
I heard somebody whisper
Please adore me
And when I looked
The moon had turned to gold


Blue

You saw a dream
A love, blue
You knew
what I was, Blue
Someone for me
my arms will hold
Somebody!

Whisper, please.


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October 13, 2020 at 3:20pm
October 13, 2020 at 3:20pm
#995804
"Resurrection Jukebox [E]



Everyday (1958) by Buddy Holly (1936-1959)
Songwriters: Buddy Holly and Norman Petty

"Everyday"

Every day, it's a-gettin' closer
Goin' faster than a roller coaster
Love like yours will surely come my way
A-hey, a-hey hey

Every day, it's a-gettin' faster
Everyone said, "Go ahead and ask her"
Love like yours will surely come my way
A-hey, a-hey hey

Every day seems a little longer
Every way, love's a little stronger
Come what may, do you ever long for
True love from me?

Every day, it's a-gettin' closer
Goin' faster than a roller coaster
Love like yours will surely come my way
A-hey, a-hey hey

Every day seems a little longer
Every way, love's a little stronger

Come what may, do you ever long for
True love from me?


Every day, it's a-gettin' closer
Goin' faster than a roller coaster
Love like yours will surely come my way

A-hey, a-hey hey
Love like yours will surely come my way

Every day

Every day gettin'-closer
Goin' faster
Love will come
A-hey, a-hey, hey

Every day
Everyone said
Love will surely come
A-hey, a-hey, hey

A little longer
A little stronger
Do you ever long for
Love?

Every day gettin' closer
faster than a roller coaster
Love will come
My way
A-hey, a-hey, hey

Come what may
A-hey, a-hey, hey


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