Minisc grows up in a world split between Humans and Elementalists.
|I have placed each chapter of the book in a separate word document attached to this item to help keep some formatting. I understand that grammar and some errors that seem obvious are more than likely still in this draft, despite my best effort to get rid of them. I will be hiring a professional editor when the time is right, but before I spend a decent chunk of change on that, I wanted to get opinions on the story elements of the book. See if it's interesting, borning, slow, well-paced that sort of stuff. You are free to point out any silly mistakes or typos obviously, I won't be offended. It will help me learn to self-edit better than I am currently capable of.|