Refreshing Reviews (Forum)

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You get a good proofreading, I get GPs for an Upgrade. We're all happy!

Welcome to Refreshing Reviews!


When my last message is entitled Hiatus, that means the shop is closed till further notice. I haven't been online in over a year.I'll try to either review or return any GPs sent for this, but please pay a bit more attention. Thank you.


First of all, this forum was previously a contest taking participants through the first two drafts and synopsis/query letter of their novels. Due to a downgrade in my Upgrade, however, I am left with only one forum and an inability to create more. Hence, this is being converted into a reviewing shop. So...

My current goal is to review a short story every week. I'm a college student with lots of homework (2 writing classes*Reading*), so I don't think I can do a lot more right now. I will also review longer works, but it will likely be a chapter a day/week, whatever I have time for. It's a possibility that I may also be late reviewing something due to a homework crunch, so if you really need your piece reviewed by a certain time, please let me know; I don't expect it to happen often, but please be patient with me when it does!

My review style is primarily of a proofreading nature, but my writing classes may give me more skills to apply here. In a review, whatever general comments I have will be on the top. Typos will have a section of the story copy/pasted, with the suggested changes in parentheses.

Please keep your submissions 13+ or under. Naturally, this means that Erotica is not accepted. Fantasy is strong enjoyed.

Ah, yes. The monetary compensation for services rendered/to get my Upgrade back.

Short Story ~ 150GPs
Chapter ~ 100GPs
Novel ~ 1,000GPs


All stories reviewed will get a link on this page with a short comment. I'm sure the authors would appreciate it if visitors dropped by to give a review of their own. *Smile*

"Faded Color"   by lajkd ~ A cameo broach: the container of memories, both good and bad.
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