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Aug 21, 2005 at 6:19pm
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Review my first chapter!
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I have a LOT of trouble with beginnings. I have been thinking about an idea for weeks, but i cant seem to put start it off correctly on paper. Can you please help me out so I can know if I'm heading in the right direction?

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Will two criminals succeed in stealing the priceless diamond, The Queen of Mars?
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Review my first chapter! · 08-21-05 6:19pm
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