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Rated: 13+ · Message Forum · Action/Adventure · #1106100

This is a forum for one of my campfires, so that the writers can brainstorm together.

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May 25, 2006 at 8:08pm
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My 2 cents...
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This is my guess:

Death's Wind shall blow once more
When Spring comes upon the land
And if you should fall
Remember you almost had it all

As still winter grips it's icy hand
Then come hunting that ancient lore
To quench the fumes of war,
Seek the aid of those not men ((because these were the only 2 that didn't have the "remember you almost had it all" piece))

While silver bells sing
While blue bells grow
And if you should fall,
Remember you almost had it all

Where fell the final blow
Life once more will spring
And if you should fall,
Remember you almost had it all

Else evil triumphant will
Ascend and rule forevermore
And if you should fall,
Remember you almost had it all

((This last verse got a little fuzzy, becuase it doesn't make sense to have 'Else' begin each... prose? I dunno, i was never good at poetry.))

Else you will fail
To find the jaded soul.
And if you should fall
Remember you almost had it all.
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My 2 cents... · 05-25-06 8:08pm
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