Writer's Fallout Shelter

I got your review, and yes, I did ask for honesty. I think you certainly gave me that. It amazes me how one person see's it one way and another a different way......good for all of us that we see it our way and if we are really lucky we will take what is offered, examine and see if from that we can improve on our writing. I appreciated your comments and hope that you will review other of my pieces. I'm 64, have really thick skin and 5 grandkids, so I can take all that can be dished out.
tom