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Hi There. I'd suggest you ask your teacher to explain when he/she means. Get your teacher to point out places and give examples of what she is wanting to see. A teacher should do that to begin with. If you like, I'm happy to have a look if you placed it on your port. Just send me an email if you'd like that. xx KSeriphyn ------------------------------------------- >> "Where http://seriphynknight.blogspot.com Everyone needs a little ** Images For Use By Upgraded+ Only ** |