The Short-Story Review

I just wrote something but sadly brevity isn't one of my strong suits. It is a little over 3,000 words so it probably isn't what you are looking to read right now. But you sound like someone seriously interested in reading and reviewing so I thought it wouldn't hurt to ask for a review.

I mostly write about interactions between people so it isn't any rollercoaster ride of action. The underlying theme is usually that you don't know one person without knowing the other. That's enough ruining the story with intentional fallacy. If you are interested it is

"At the Pool" 

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