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Dazz. is a disgusting, captivating, frightening, and well written look at the future. It paints a dark picture of technology and our species. Its success is in its use of dialogue, a distinct voice, and clever plot. It's instructive to me as a writer because I've been trying to beef up my use of simile, something Dazz doesn't make much use of. It reminds me that there are other aspects to good writing.

I'd be interested in having a more in depth discussion of this with other readers.

Thanks for the suggestion, Lori.

Marcia

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