I'm sorry but I don't like to review poetry. To be blunt, I don't truly care for it and cannot offer up a fair review. I'd rate it all a 1 and mess up everybody. I'm not able to be that mean.
That being said, I did read the poem. I liked the way you presented the poem. The line breaks almost fool you into thinking it's not a rhymer.
I didn't hate it, which from me is a compliment.
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