Giantess Fetish Forum

So, with the latest chapter of my story I'd thought I'd go for the 'what if' approach of art imitating life and all that (not that I'd ever claim that my schlock is art in any way), and was wondering what people thought of the approach. Is it a good idea, or a really stupid one?

I've realised that I don't really get much feedback on my work here, and so wondered if this forum might be willing to offer some up in this instance, that I may guide further additions in a direction more pleasing to the community. If I'm met with overwhelming silence, I guess I'll just bimble along ignorantly with no thought to the consequences.

Here's the link, anyroad:

http://www.writing.com/main/interact/item_id/707969/action/view/chapter_map/1322...