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Jun 21, 2008 at 11:24pm
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Star Commander Screenplays - Big Gift Points!
by Geoff Author IconMail Icon
Viktor,

I am working on a new comedy animated series and have developed several screenplays. The setting is the year 4009 in a wooden spaceship that is held together with duct tape. I have several episodes of the show in my portfolio and I give out serious Gift Points for reviews! I invite you to review as many as you want, especially if you get a kick out of them. The TV series is designed for the 18+ crowd and should appeal to Adult Swim viewers.

The comedy is low brow and lots of fun. I have had several reviews that say they love the humor and the story is weak. I would really like some constructive criticism that will help get this show ready for TV.

Please review the following and as many others as you like. Thank You.

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"This Here's Govitt Country"

http://www.writing.com/main/view_item/item_id/1441277

Thank You!

-Geoff Cook
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Star Commander Screenplays - Big Gift Points! · 06-21-08 11:24pm
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Re: Star Commander Screenplays - Big Gift Points! · 06-22-08 12:13am
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