Viktor's Reviews~Closed for Renovations

Hi writers,

I would like everyone to check out my new chapters and tell me what you think.
It is going to be a book series call "The Theriomorphs" the first one is called "A Horse Cry."

Chapter 1: This chapter is slow, especially if your not into horses, but enjoy the imagery and character development. It first stresses the powerful bond that Karrie has with her horses, especially Luna. Then she is suprised when a strange human boy shows up randomly.

CHapter 2: Dives dramatically into the plot from the second paragraph when someone breaks into her house, when she's by herself. She finds the stranger is not what he seems, and neither is she.

Chapter 3: They leave on the long journey, it is a reflection on their thoughts and feelings and a development of the characters.

HOPE YOU ENJOY IT! ~*~Joy Heartland~*~