Item Icon
\"Reading Printer Friendly Page Tell A Friend
★★★★★ (4)
Rated: 18+ · Message Forum · Community · #1282016

Post links to your items for rate & review requests.

<< Previous  •  Message List  •  Next >>
Reply  •  Post New
May 17, 2009 at 7:41am
#1910548
River of night, opinions please
by drboris Author IconMail Icon
Hullo everyone,

Here is a link to "River of Night", my first serious attempt at a horror piece.

I am happy with it, but at the same time a little uneasy about it. I rewrote the midsection and ended the piece where I originally intended the middle to be.

What do you guys think?

 River of night  (18+)
A mountain man takes a raft ride that he wishes he hadn't.
#1537021 by drboris Author IconMail Icon




Signature created by our dear talented friend, Kelly1202

A sig made for me by my good friend [Link To User lutz06] , a great writer and very nice lady.

~~Image ID# 1532657's Content Rating Exceeds Item Content Rating~~
MESSAGE THREAD
*Star*
River of night, opinions please · 05-17-09 7:41am
by drboris Author IconMail Icon
Re: River of night, opinions please · 05-17-09 9:09pm
by A Non-Existent User
Post a reply...
Bold | Ctrl+BItalics | Ctrl+IUnderline | Ctrl+UStrikethrough | Ctrl+Shift+XHide - Click to RevealSuperscriptSubscriptColorFont TypeText SizeHighlightText AlignmentLine SpacingIndentQuote | Ctrl+Shift+Q@ Symbol - Mention User/ItemInsert EmoticonUpload Photo (Premium Required)SnippetsCreative ToolsCode ViewEditor SettingsUndoRedoToggle Fullscreen

The following applies to this forum item as a whole, not this post. Feedback sent here will go to the forum's owner, Pennywise.
Printed from https://www.writing.com/main/forums/message_id/1910548