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Write songs much?Feel free to discuss it here(plus R&R as always).
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Aug 7, 2010 at 11:03pm
OT: Reviews would help
Sea Of Dreams

This is a place of love deceit and hate
But yet were destined to forever wait
While some are chosen and given life
Others fade away and burn out their light

I'm just another drop in the sea of dreams
A helpless image that wishes to be
The skies are blue with shades of gray
a storm is coming to take me away

The winds are whispering a siren song
The sorrow in their words drags me along
Far far away, far far away

So take my hand and we'll sail forever
We'll escape this land and wait no longer
To sail the seas and ride the wind
To open our eyes and stop being blind

We all have drops in the sea of dreams
Conquer the fears and make them be
OT: Reviews would help · 08-07-10 11:03pm
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