Story Cafe

Hey Forum!

I have been a member of writing.com since high school (I started a new account when I began college). However, I have not written in a while and would like to reacquaint myself with all of you. I would like some help especially with my story The Various Exploits of Emily Pritchard. I never thought I would be the type to write a young adult novel, so all of you out there that are skilled at it, I am desperate for your feedback. My story needs a lot of work! but I think it could have potential. Think of The Traveling Pants series or some similar type of book when reading it. It is finished but not all of it is online (I have to finish editing the last few chapters).

Thank you so much! Let me know if you would like me to review your works as well. Also, please be critical and tell me honestly if it is awful and what could make it decent. Tough love!

Liz