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Dec 28, 2010 at 12:28pm
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Is this scene real enough?
Hello!
I'm working on some scenes for my novel project and was wondering if this scene felt real enough to you guys. Any feedback is appreciated! Also please excuse the grammar, it is after all my first draft and I'm just trying to get all the basic story down. Thank you.

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Is this scene real enough? · 12-28-10 12:28pm
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