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For WDCs 11th birthday party! Write a story in 11 lines.
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Sep 2, 2011 at 2:12am
Edited: September 2, 2011 at 2:33am
behind closed doors
by eilaog
“Why are you laying in the hallway with your head in this clustered room Jesse?”
“Tell you the truth Zach; I am too afraid to go any further in.”
“Is my big brother afraid of the dark all of a sudden?”
“See the closet door? Well I had shut it earlier.”
“Then why is it open?”
“I had shut the one going into the bedroom too.”
“Then why are you laying in the hallway with your head in the room?”
“I can feel eyes watching me; there is something in the closet brother.”
“Then why don’t you just shut the closet door?”
“I already did that brother, stay here I’ll do it again this time you are my witness.”
“The door is opening, Jesse!”
behind closed doors · 09-02-11 2:12am
by eilaog

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