Calling All Teens

Hey, I'm Summer. 16, American, lover of movies, books, and chocolate...well food in general actually. Haha, anyway, I was wondering if anyone wanted to take a peek at and review Chapter 1 of my teen sci-fi novel. I wrote it for National Novel Writing Month. I'll be happy to look at your work as well (if its not too long. Sorry, I don't have that much time on my hands). But I do usually offer in-depth reviews.
Anyway, if you want to take a look at it here it is. And if you happen to read it and like the first chapter, then dive into Chapter 2. (or read chapter 2 first, it won't throw you off)

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