Reviews by Ledan Dark

Hi, I was wondering if you would mind reading my query letter for my novel, which is in my port and is currently titled "Eyes of the Dark Query Draft." It's really short, I promise. I'm in desperate need of another review. I really want to send this out to agents, but I need to know what to improve on and fix before I do so. Please let me know your opinion of it and what I can do to make it better; it would honestly mean the world to me.

Thank you in advance.

Sara