Noticing Newbies

Hi, I'm new (obviously) to Writing.com and just posted a short story titled "Suited". It's a story based off the idea of a deck of cards, where the cards are actually people. (King of Diamonds is actually a King of his part of the land with a Queen, Joker, and stuff like that). Suited is aimed towards a younger audience so the content was modified to not be violent or inappropriate. (Because I want to be able to read it to my son when he is born) There is an unexpected twist at the end as well which the people who have read it enjoy. I would appreciate if a couple of you could read/ review it :) (its just a static post or whatever, because I'm a free member). I have other stories I will want to post here eventually, as long as I can get a couple people reading it. I just love to write and want to share my creations with as many people as I can.