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Review Please?
I'm new, and I've just written a new short story, "The Arsonist's Girl". It is in my portfolio, and it needs a lot of work. But i need some constructive criticism on it and would welcome all who would read it. Also, what should I do with the work I've written thus far, any tips? Thanks
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