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Jul 11, 2013 at 11:16am

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Re: Re: Re: Building a Trellis

by Dave

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Perhaps, but isn't it so much fun?

The pet/bet rhyme was a very nice touch, but why did you feel the need to twist the syntax in the next to last line?

Let the creativity flow from your soul!

Dave
"The Poet's Place "

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Building a Trellis · 07-08-13 9:34am
by Dave

Re: Building a Trellis · 07-08-13 9:54am
by Marci Missing Everyone

Re: Building a Trellis · 07-08-13 10:02am
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Re: Re: Building a Trellis · 07-08-13 12:44pm
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Re: Re: Re: Building a Trellis · 07-08-13 12:45pm
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Re: Re: Re: Building a Trellis · 07-08-13 12:51pm
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Re: Re: Re: Re: Building a Trellis · 07-09-13 12:32pm
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Re: Building a Trellis · 07-09-13 4:48pm
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Re: Re: Building a Trellis · 07-11-13 10:22am
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Re: Re: Re: Building a Trellis · 07-11-13 11:16am
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Re: Re: Re: Re: Re: Building a Trellis · 07-11-13 11:59am
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