October Novel Prep Challenge

That's frustrating. How about setting him up for a villain monologue? Would that help?

My second MC is the worst. She constantly insists the her sole motivation is to have fun, or some similar fluffy reasoning, and when I sit her down and say that's not quite enough, she turns all grim and serious. Last time ended up with her have some dreadful disease, and she still hasn't told me everything.