Noticing Newbies

Hey guys, I've written a few things here and there, more in fits of inspiration than anything. But after being pressured to reveal some of them by some friends (under the influence of a few drinks), they all said they thought it was hilarious. It's a comedy, so that's a good thing. But I suppose I wanted some unbiased and slightly more helpful feedback. I've posted a few things, keeping a few in reserve because of course I'm not happy with them yet. I'm sure you know the feeling.

Anyhow, hope you enjoy, and if you want to read the "hilarious" piece, this is the one I was referencing

Wild Card  (13+) A career secret agent is tasked with helping a rookie agent learn the ropes. #1966049 by Escapism

. Shameless plug AND a newbie intro, that's what we call a two-fer folks.

Hope to hear from you guys soon, and look forward to reading some of your stuff, as well!