Well, that's okay if you understand that you will have to rewrite and know what needs to be rewritten. My intro doesn't have enough of that either though as I go along its getting better. I will in december go back and work on that part and many others. Getting perfection in a piece is writing, getting feedback, rewriting,and getting feedback until its perfect.
We all have to do that. You can too. I know you can. Its frustrating and sometimes boring but it is what has to be done for perfection.
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