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Nov 11, 2015 at 11:42pm
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Re: Re: Re: Form of the week: Retourne
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I don't know if I have this returnee I may have it mixed up

Across The Horizon

Across the horizon on a Cyprus sea
Imagery pictures in my mind be
Ships that sail on fluffy clouds
As far as the naked eye can see
Together we sat on this distant shore.

Glistening lights on the water flow
Dancing colours glinting from the suns glow
Lapping sounds from the current below
Send frothy waves to and fro
Together we watched bather come and go.

Bathers swim earnestly
Children on the sand play
All these scenes in front of me
As I sit in a little café on the Bay.
But God has called you home
And I look at the horizon alone.
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