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Thank you very much. This is helpful. The only Vonnegut I've read is Slaughterhouse five. But that was the vibe I was going for, not so much Hitchhiker's guide.

The Gravity Lenses, are actually just devices (in my story) that steer the particles on their course. So it's not like the smeared images of Galaxies we see through the hubble pictures. I'm just calling the lm gravity lenses. But part of the plot is that these thingsare unstable and collapse into Black Holes. And of course that is briefly mentioned at the start of the story so.... "I wonder what is going to happen the climax...."

Anyway thank you for your feedback. Maybe I can get your impression of the first couple chapters when I post them?