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Dec 24, 2015 at 1:25pm
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Re: Lesson 4: Weaving the Fabric
by Dave Author IconMail Icon
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Nice job, Laura!

One minor deviation from the assignment: In order to complete the enveloping effect, the second line of the last stanza should rhyme with the first and second lines of the first stanza, as in "Troubadour" .

Let the creativity flow from your soul! *Cool*
Dave
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Lesson 4: Weaving the Fabric · 12-24-15 12:22pm
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Re: Re: Lesson 4: Weaving the Fabric · 12-24-15 1:51pm
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