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Dec 26, 2015 at 11:22am
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Re: Lesson 6: The Rhythms of Language
by Dave Author IconMail Icon
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Have you noticed that writing poetry can also make you "Forget the strife/ Caused by life"?

The rhyming helps to generate a rhythm and also adds a touch of humor.

I like the way you designed the progressively longer line lengths to move from a tone of intense focus to a more relaxed reflective mood.

Let the creativity flow from your soul! *Cool*
Dave
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Lesson 6: The Rhythms of Language · 12-26-15 6:58am
by Laura Leary Author IconMail Icon
*Star* Re: Lesson 6: The Rhythms of Language · 12-26-15 11:22am
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