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Dave, Thanks for taking the time to provide such an in-depth explanation of your poem and mine. Can you explain a little more how syllables connect to the pentameter count? I've been reading and re-reading and am still a little confused by all this. I was able to da-Dum the meter in my head and now I can't. It was how I always measured iambic pentameter. I knew I was not where I needed to be with this poem. Lots of info - maybe break this into two lessons? Just a thought:) Thanks! Sabaka |