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Jan 5, 2016 at 10:32pm
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Edited: January 5, 2016 at 11:43pm
Re: Re: Re: Re: Re: Tools of the trade: Iambic Meter
Did I fix the anapest?

The tree was trimmed with Christmas ornaments galore,
and packages were brightly wrapped, all tied with bows.
Family were laughing as snow began to fall;
we marveled at the picture from the warmth inside.

Saint Nick was on his way with a sleigh full of toys;
children headed to bed in anticipation.
We placed bright glowing lights around the sparkling tree,
and snuggled deep beneath the quilt till morning’s light.

Yet spirits unspoken gathered, encircled us.
All our departed family, still they remained
to celebrate with us this snowy festive night;
Each rejoined once more in tonight’s circle of love.
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