After looking at what I have written for this outline I find I'm way to detailed. I get so involved with the story I never finish the outline to the end. I do know how it will end. Everyone is happy and the truth is revealed. The people change and love wins in the end.
Its getting there that'is the problem. I need more conflict. Things that will get people to turn the page.
Since my book has had reviews of "I couldn't put it down once I got into i,t" I'm afraid this one will be too predictable. Its a similar story. Like old Harlequins; the format is simple but the characters and conflicts are what keep readers buying them.
I want people to want the process. They want to be on the edge of their seat what is going to happen next? What juicy truth is going to be revealed?