Noticing Newbies

Well, I'm admitting that this was more of a spur of the moment choice. I haven't been working much in terms of writing, only since late last year, when I began putting daydreams down onto paper. So the story is nowhere near complete, mostly a jumble of various unfinished chapters. I'm trying to get one at least partly ready to post tonight, and see how it turns out. It's definitely a draft, but I would love to be critiqued now and not when it's practically set in stone and ready to be fully posted. I guess the thinking is that it would be harder to change mistakes then versus now. So hello to everyone who reads this, and Happy 2017 to everyone!