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Jun 21, 2017 at 6:33pm
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A Review Request
This story for a contest ending 30th June. I'm not too happy with the end of it, but the word count limit is a very tight 2000 and I'm just 12 words short of the limit so I'm not sure what I can do with it. Can anything earlier on be cut to allow for a stronger ending?

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