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Welcome to WDC Aevitas,
This is the right place to help you with fine-tuning your stories. Once you get familiar with the site (check the "Get Started" and Writing.Com 101" links at the top right), others will be glad to review and encourage you on when you post an item. It also helps if you let others know exactly what you're looking for in a review (plot, characters. grammar, everything ).
The most important thing is to have fun as you write.