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Dec 26, 2017 at 5:10pm
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Re: Ken's Salty Sunrise: Tools of the trade: Synesthesia
by Tinker Author IconMail Icon
Hi Ken, Sunsets and sunrises seem to the perfect medium for sensory poetry. This poem is no exception. warmth of salt hmmm that is something to ponder. Beautiful imagery in this piece.

Just a note, my understanding of the elements of the Genesis is the rhyme is abacab abacab abacab turned on only 3 rhymes the c rhyme linking the 3 stanzas. Easier said than done. I have yet to write one for just that reason.

~~Tink
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